The restoration of old buildings in major cities costs numerous government’s expenditure. This money should be used in new housing and road development. Do you agree or disagree ?
It is a common belief that the renovation of old constructors in the majority of nations in the world have a high budget of state-leader’s expenditure. However, some people opinion that this money should be invested in new dwellings and enhance the quality of the road. Individually, I partly agree with this statement and this essay will address the reasons for my view as follows.
There are numerous reasons why the authorities should pour funds into the restoration of historic buildings. Firstly, as a matter of fact, the majority of old buildings have been built for a long time. Therefore, granted that it is not restored, it could fatally deteriorate and even collapse anytime. Consequences, it would have an implicit danger for the population living near this location. Besides, the old constructors would have the traditional and cultural value of each country. For that reason, state-leaders need to pour funds into historic buildings to help the ordinary population, particularly the younger generation, know more about the tradition and history in the city where they were born or living. To cite an example, the Vietnamese literature museum had nearly been demolished because it did not have any funds to continue maintaining the quality of the objects inside and the facilities of the museum. Fortunately, Vietnam’ government decided to pour the invest to this museum to restore, and nowadays, not only numerous of youngsters in Vietnam have been know that museum but also many international friends or magazines have interested about that destination.
Furthermore, the money of authorities should be used to build new dwellings and road development for many reasons. It is well-known the fact that building more houses and improving the quality of roads with the main purpose is to preserve for the civilian people, hence enhancing the life quality of the citizens. In addition, with the funds, people could build new locations that could attract the tourists such as landmarks or skyscrapers. As a result, thriving tourism earns huge profits and that helps develop the economy of each nation.
In conclusion, the state-leader should invest money in both old buildings and new housing and road development. It not only could reflect the history of a country but also develop the economy of a nation.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 974, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ly, Vietnam’ government decided to pour the invest to this museum to restore, and nowadays...
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Line 3, column 1079, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...rous of youngsters in Vietnam have been know that museum but also many international...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21866666667 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92833027888 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525333333333 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3303321967 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.117647059 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0588235294 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35294117647 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2823284722 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886952510276 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854360727043 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186700477323 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046271422507 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 974, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ly, Vietnam’ government decided to pour the invest to this museum to restore, and nowadays...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1079, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...rous of youngsters in Vietnam have been know that museum but also many international...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21866666667 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92833027888 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525333333333 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3303321967 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.117647059 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0588235294 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35294117647 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2823284722 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886952510276 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854360727043 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186700477323 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046271422507 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.