Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger.
Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?
Currently, there are many opinions that people in their thirties are usually suitable to get married and have children. Being from that ages, they are able to use their own skills to create a better future for their children or at least give them a full life. I also agree with this, and in this essay I will show its benefits.
On the one hand, getting married after the age of thirty is very beneficial for many aspects. After many years of study and have many real-life interactions, new couples will acquire the necessary skills through civic education to take control of their activities. Most adults in their thirties are qualified in every single way from balancing the main income to stabilizing the own emotion. And, obviously, they are also mature enough to get into a marriage relationship,in fact, when people get married and have children from that age, they can be fully prepare to deal with the challenges that coming out with the marriage.For instance, not only can they send their children to the best schools, but they can also deal with their private problems more patiently.
On the other hand, people before the age of thirty cannot get married because the income of each family is the most important factor. First and foremost, people before the age of thirty have to find themselves a job to be able to earn for living. In addition, having a good relationship between boys and girls is also difficult at this age. Several studies have shown that people who prefer to marry at a later age are more successful and better equipped to raise their children or create a better life for them. Due to the benefits mentioned, to my own perspectives, I ought to admit that getting married in the late age will bring more advantages to each person's future married life.
In conclusion, I personally believe that it is more beneficial for people to get married in their thirties than in their younger days. With all the advantages and the developments that modern society have offer, human being have to put into the changing, especially changes in perception, way of life and personality to start a married life for all the goods. And finally, that is the extent of my understanding of the matter.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: For
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Suggestion:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'offered'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, at least, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76822916667 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55282594425 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494791666667 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2340540095 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.066666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372547670528 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13058423515 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075490912436 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248615267174 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307598391464 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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