Nowadays, most people are moving and living in big cities. Why is this happening? Is this trend good or bad?
An increasing number of people are moving to large metropolises in the hope of a better future. This essay will discuss some of the challenges of living in urban areas and several measures that governments could take to improve the quality of life for all city residents.
One of the main problems that urban dwellers have to deal with is traffic congestion. Increasing unproductive travel time not only causes stress and tiredness but also lowers work productivity. City commuters often have to spend between 30 minutes and an hour sitting in traffic on their way to and from work. Another drawback of living in a major city is poor air quality caused by the significant rise in the amount of toxic emissions released from power plants and industrial sites in recent years. Serious air pollution puts inhabitants of cities at a higher risk of lung cancer, asthma attacks and other respiratory illnesses.
There are a number of approaches that urban policymakers can implement to tackle the problems mentioned above. First, it is necessary to improve public transport to make it more attractive to people. The problem of traffic would be effectively addressed if more people decided to use buses or commuter trains instead of their private vehicles. The government could also consider charging peak-hour tolls to discourage drivers from travelling during peak periods. Second, in order to improve the quality of air in major metropolises, stricter regulations should be imposed to limit hazardous gas emissions and encourage the use of more environmentally friendly energy sources.
In conclusion, various steps could be taken in order to solve traffic congestion and air pollution, which are the two main problems facing urban life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... better future. This essay will discuss some of the challenges of living in urban areas and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23214285714 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8168566031 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635714285714 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5224133637 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.692307692 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.088963072174 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0283022751587 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388883852473 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.058196162029 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643044639387 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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