Nowadays, most people are moving and living in big cities. Why is this happening? Is this trend good or bad?
A lot of people move from small towns and villages to huge cities. I suppose that the main reason of such movements is the lack of opportunities in small places and, of course, the high level of urbanization is not a good think both for one county and for the whole society.
Why this trend is a bad thing? Firstly, because villages are the main sources of food and little cities often have a lot of historical heritage and play important role in the transport infrastructure of a country. So if a great part of population moves to big cities these cities may not have enough food to feed its own population more over the life expectancy in these cities can fall dramatically because of lack of organic products. The extinction of small towns may increase the price level in the county, because such places usually play roles of logistic centers.
So we can understand that society should struggle with this trend. I believe that the government should support people living there. First of all, it must give more social benefits such as high pension, normal salary and opportunities for doing business. As a next step, the government shoul find a stimul for young people to return to their cities or villages after receiving of high education. The good example of such actions in Russia is a programm for doctors who move to villages, the government present them 1 million of rubles after they spend some amount of time in village.
To sum up, I think that this trend is a very actual problem in our society and the government should control it in other way results can be very harmful to our society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, so, i suppose, i think, of course, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67957746479 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53856146013 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55985915493 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7839411358 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.75 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193776713375 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865064005225 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109467558487 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101298572996 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158765091902 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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