The shown bar chart illustrates the number of coffee and tea consumed in five Australian cities, which are Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart.
Overall, it is obvious that among the three subjects shown, going to a cafe and tea is most popular in most cities except for Adelaide. In Melbourne, the number of people was in the habit of going to a cafe and tea was the highest, there was the opposite true in Brisbane bought fresh coffee.
Looking at the graph more closely, one can see that citizens from Melbourne stand out as taking the lead in the number of people who enjoyed coffee and tea in the cafe, which stood at about 65 percent. Melbourne was followed by Hobart and Sydney all also represented more than 60 percent. The second most popular in these cities was buying instant coffee the figure for Melbourne accounted for half of all, Hobart was appropriate 60 percent and Sydney was 45 percent.
On the other hand, there was a significant gap between buying fresh coffee and others in Brisbane, and Adelaide. The figure for buying fresh coffee in two cities all under 35 percent, which was twice as low as compared to others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, second, so, except for, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71782178218 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35820821093 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544554455446 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2772501054 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.125 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134765960334 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660095510414 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365019784635 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095437103059 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262585985576 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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