Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree about his opinion?
The amount of attention to wild animals and birds always has been a controversial argument. Some people believe that it is too much and others are the opposite. I agree with the second group and in this essay describe the reasons.
To begin with, keeping the wildlife is an essential issue for all human generations and we should do our best to transfer all of the species without change to the next generations. In the other words, the extinction of rare animals like Pandas is a dangerous problem that may be occurred in the case of inappropriate protection. Another reason belonging to attention to wildlife is that from authentic approach dictate to us our responsibility to help other species to endure minimum repercussion because of human activities that endanger them. For instance, global warming and ice melting due to human's need for more energy will lead to significant changes in the life of animals like Penguins and polar bears in the Poles.
On the other hand, some people think we have more important subjects rather than a life of animals and try to protect them. They say that priority of animals is lower than humans and we should consume the main attention on humanity's problems. For example, when we have a lot of hungry kids, it is not logical to assign resources to animals.
In a conclusion, I would not wish to underestimate the necessity of attention to people issues but each subject should be evaluated independently too. In my idea, the attention and resources to protect animals are not too much and I believe that we are responsible to keep them.
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- Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds Do you agree or disagree about his opinion 67
- Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds Do you agree or disagree about his opinion 67
- Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds Do you agree or disagree about his opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 123, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...s and we should do our best to transfer all of the species without change to the next gene...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, so, then, for example, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81617647059 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75898971028 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9608411607 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.166666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244325687831 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973852276424 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850719165392 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176217282411 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968510816475 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.