Claim: Restaurants should be required to display nutritional information about the food they serve
Reason: This knowledge will help diners make healthy choices and reduce their risk of diet
related health problems
Would displaying nutritional information about food served in restaurants help tailor diners healthy choices? Some will argue that such information will help diners choose wisely considering their risk of developing diet related problems. However, others would argue that diners can make right decisions on what diet will benefit them without the nutritional information being displayed. After, weighing the evidence, it is certain that nutritional information makes for better diet decision and result in limited health problems compared to when they are not displayed.
Now consider how nutritional information would help diners. A peptic Ulcer patient will greatly appreciate the nutritional information a restaurant displays, since it will help him chose food that would not aggravate the ulcer. Ulcer patients usually avoid foods that a pepperi and very salty. In addition, such patients also avoid food that are hard. If ever, they eat this kind of food without prior information, they could breakdown and would be needing medical attention. This would result in loss of productive hours. Therefore, displaying the nutritional information of diet will greatly help diners choice considering their health status.
Like a peptic Ulcer patient, people who have had history of diabetes in their lineage would also cherish a restaurant that displays of nutritional information. People from such families have the tendencies to develop Diabetes. This disease is chronic and no cure has being found for it till date. Hence, family member who have not developed the disease would begin to discipline themselves to eat certain foods that will keep them healthy. In this case, foods that are high in sugar would be avoided. Thus, displaying information on the nutritional components of diets will advice such people to make proper diet and health decision.
Some would argue that people already know the type of foods the need, like people trying to reduce their weigh. However, it is important to note that mistakes could still occur even if person knows exactly what type of food they require. Besides, nutritional information display would still aid decision making in this regards.
In conclusion, it is clear that displaying nutritional information helps diners make better decisions on diets that will benefit their health as compared to when the information is not displayed. Ulcer patients and people who are trying to avoid developing cancer will greatly appreciate such information. In all cases, displaying the nutritional information will benefit everyone including those who already know exactly what they want in a meal.
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| 2023-05-31 | Mateo Chen | 66 | view |
| 2022-08-27 | David91 | 62 | view |
| 2022-08-13 | David Olatunji | 54 | view |
| 2022-08-13 | David Olatunji | 54 | view |
| 2022-08-13 | David Olatunji | 54 | view |
- Claim Restaurants should be required to display nutritional information about the food they serve Reason This knowledge will help diners make healthy choices and reduce their risk of diet related health problems 54
- Claim Restaurants should be required to display nutritional information about the food they serve Reason This knowledge will help diners make healthy choices and reduce their risk of diet related health problems 54
- Claim Restaurants should be required to display nutritional information about the food they serve Reason This knowledge will help diners make healthy choices and reduce their risk of diet related health problems 54
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 446, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...rmation, they could breakdown and would be needing medical attention. This would result in...
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Line 3, column 574, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'advise' (a verb)?
Suggestion: advise
...he nutritional components of diets will advice such people to make proper diet and hea...
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Line 4, column 314, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...play would still aid decision making in this regards. In conclusion, it is clear th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in all cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 12.4196629213 209% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2229.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 408.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46323529412 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6873287165 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460784313725 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 660.6 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0599536084 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9130434783 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7391304348 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86956521739 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435070130787 0.243740707755 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140228362023 0.0831039109588 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10895261967 0.0758088955206 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269850711925 0.150359130593 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105874162265 0.0667264976115 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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