If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Right from childhood, it is hardcoded in our brains that we need to set goals for ourselves and achieve them to be successful. In every age and sphere of life, everyday people are hustling and struggling to achieve their goals. Surely, there must be something that comes with the attainment of these goals which makes people push harder and achieve them through different means. I mostly agree with the claim that everything is justifiable in order to attain a worthy goal. My stance on this is because of three main reasons, as stated further.
People set personal goals to achieve things like work targets, personal growth, and skill development among other things. These guide one’s daily routine, lifestyle, and habits, and understandably so, since they are contributing to one’s progression in career and life in general. The hunger to achieve these set targets early is the primary motivator of a lot of people to get out of bed every morning. For example, individuals preparing for highly competitive public exams, like the coveted UPSC exam in India, leave everything and commit themselves to be successful in that exam. The aspirants are known to quit their jobs, move to different cities which are hubs of coaching for that exam, burn the midnight oil in preparation for the same, and whatnot. They get completely cut off from the online world and spend all their time in the strenuous books recommended for the exam. But once they clear UPSC and get the job of their dreams, every means they used to pass with flying colors seems like a good story to tell the future generations. Everything then seems justifiable since the goal attained was the most worthy in the country.
Secondly, on a societal level, common interests guide large groups to reach their goals. Events and things that impact society as a whole becomes the strong motivation for people to rise up as groups and work towards their betterment. I believe that to channel such strong motivation into action by running that extra mile, going out of the way, and thinking out of the box is completely justified. For example, in the struggle against apartheid system in South Africa, the revolutionaries and leaders left no stone unturned to fight for their rights and to stop racial discrimination by the all-white government. They faced brutal beatings, went on hunger strikes, faced backlash from many, and went to prisons, only to finally attain their one goal - the elimination of racial discrimination. Had they not been persistent and tenacious in their struggle, the system would still be active today in the modern world. This example highlights the fact that for goals that actually matter, it becomes essential to run that extra mile and attain them.
However, I concede that there must be a limit to where one would go on attaining their goal. It must never be at the cost of someone else. Goals need to be attained in an ethical and judicious manner, otherwise, those goals are simply ephemeral and consequently of no use. Every means and measure followed should be on one’s own accountability and no one else’s. For example, the cost of expansion of industries in today’s global economy is borne by local businesses and craftsmen. Large e-commerce platforms are putting small shop owners out of business by outrunning them in terms of convenience and price. A company would give a 20% discount to a consumer on a product and would earn that amount by charging their corporate client a hike of 30% in some other business. This, however, is not possible for a shopkeeper to do, who ultimately loses its customers to this giant conglomerate. These kinds of ways and measures are not at all justified in any way, and contradict the claim given in the prompt.
In conclusion, there is nothing wrong with attaining a goal through any means possible, but only if it is kept under a strict ethical check. If it comes at the cost of someone else, nature, or mankind, it is not justified and would lead to atrocious results in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, for example, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 14.8657303371 222% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 33.0505617978 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 103.0 58.6224719101 176% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3355.0 2235.4752809 150% => OK
No of words: 685.0 442.535393258 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89781021898 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.11590702189 4.55969084622 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65191281652 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 358.0 215.323595506 166% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522627737226 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 1024.2 704.065955056 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.77640449438 563% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2051221323 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.225806452 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0967741935 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138833753798 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380433313999 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446934747304 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871295764279 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273582151432 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 158.0 100.480337079 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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