When the comfort kicks into the life, there is very high tendency that one becomes reckless. It is important for one to go through the hardships to value what they have with them and realize the importance of how fortunate they are. Moreover, the luxuries in today’s life prevent people, especially youths to not value the efforts that went behind and are irresponsible in spending money.
Due to all readily available facilities to the people in today’s life, their struggles are inherently reduced. For instance, now people don’t have to worry about if they want to commute from one place to other, the reason is now a days people are served with the faclities of all modern vehicles that ease their lives. Previously people need to work really hard to reach from one place to other. In addition, people now travel overseas also conviniently, which was not the case before. All these facilties are in a way helpful but also at the same time make individual not struggle to achieve it. Before people were so determined to work hard and struggle alot as these facilites are considered normal to all now but during that time not everyone was priviliged and one had to really work hard to get all the pleasure of these luxuries.
Second reason is when childrens see the struggle their parents are doing, they are motivated in achieving their goal and do well in their life. For example, there are many luminaries who come from lower middle class family and have done wonders in their respective areas. For example, A.P.J. Abdul Kalam, born in small village in Kerela, came from poor family but he did very well in field of rocket science. He contributed alot in rocket designing and launching. When he was child, he struggled to get two times meal but when he succeeded he donated lot of his money to many space organisations, including ISRO- Indian Space Research Organisation.
Of course, it is not necessary that you become successful only when you face hardships. There are many leaders who came from well to do families and still left their mark in their area. For example, Sardar Vallabhbhai Patel, his parents were themselves well educated and Sardar Vallabhbhai was given all luxuries from childhood. But he did not let that spoil him, he worked really hard and completed PhD, contributing alot to the society. He even helped in fighting against Britisher with his tactics and skills. But that is not the case everyone, as there is very high tendency that people do not value what they have. One do not become great, without working hard and if you have all luxuries of life it is highly likely that one do not realize the worth and in turn, do not put efforts themselves to conserve it.
In conclusion, the luxuries of modern life make people value less of what they are priviliged with. They consider all facitlites to be inevitable part of their lives. Thus, they do not work as hard, and are dependent on the providers. As a result, they do not become strong independent and are less likely to become successful.
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- Government should place few if any restrictions on scientific research and development 66
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition 66
- Universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying 50
- In any field of inquiry the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions 66
- The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning f 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, really, second, so, still, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2521.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 526.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7927756654 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49271734876 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473384030418 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 797.4 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5209458201 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.84 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.04 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135464430717 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413172257737 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344931219355 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770741032308 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254440834477 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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