Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The question mentioned above presents an arbitrary choice regarding the attitude toward living. Some people inline to face the life by planning and organizing previously while others prefer to face it by instinct. In the following essay, I will explain why I agree with this viewpoint.
To begin with, as modern life is very complex with rapid changing of everything, making a good plan can avoid mistakes and tolerate the risks. The more you prepare in advance, the less chance the mistakes happens, Moreover, even sometimes they are unavoidable, having a plan previously can lead you not to be so nervous and uncertain. My brother's experience can be a negative example. He is the one who usually do the decision with a lack of vision. Consequently, after entering university, he discovered the major he selected does not match his interests and it also becomes gradually out of date for the job market.
Furthermore, sometimes the unexpected event occurs, and the ability to plan and organize can help you conquer the flexibility of world. Making plan does not mean to be rigid or restrained, but to think the possible consequence before it happens. Take myself for instance, I always expect there will be some unpredictable consequence, and I will prepare for it by conceiving an alternative plan. Doing so, I can remain sound and stable if it truly occurs in my life.
Finally, in the modern world, a plenty of possible choices are set there, waiting for people to select. However, since there are too many choices, numerous people become anxious, owing to the fact that we never know which one is the best. In my point of view, I owe the circumstance to the problem of lacking imagination, since they are not able to imagine a concrete picture of future. For the sake to solve the problem, the ability of planning and organizing is necessary, for the reason that the ability of imagining depends on it. By planning, you can paint a picture of future in your mind as well as construct a structure of it. Even if it may be unrealistic sometime, it can help you make a decision that you are not willing to regret.
Given the reasons above, I totally hold the belief on the statement. The ability of planning and organizing contributes to avoid mistakes, reduce the uncertainty and look into the future. As a result, I firmly believe that the ability of planning and organizing is necessary toward the modern life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, while, even so, for instance, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2014.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84134615385 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74870531654 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545673076923 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 666.0 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9527278444 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9047619048 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8095238095 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09523809524 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295643132227 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789617119165 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579227132511 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157782125356 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261928087608 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.