It is true that face to face communication was being substituted by the use of social network among people in society. Despite some disadvantages of this trend, i would argue that there are outweighed by the advantages.
On the one hand, social media could be associated with serious implications. Firstly, due to abuse of social media, the user's health could run a risk of being harmed. This is because contacting constantly for a long time with digital devices could cause diseases, for example: obesity, eye diseases,...Secondly, users could be afraid of communication in real life. The reason is that they are used to the feeling of using social networks, which causes them to separate from the real world.
On the other hand, I believe that the benefits are more significant than such disadvantages. First, social networks could bring an improvement in social relationships. This is because users would communicate with each other more easily and conveniently through digital devices such as: mobile phones, computers,... without hanging out and going far. Similarly, due to the internet, users might contact and make friends with people, who are far away without fear of geographical distances.
In conclusion, although social media could do damage to people interactions in the future, I consider that the benefits are more significant than the drawbacks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32258064516 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08892603281 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603686635945 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2656939951 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.25 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19793039815 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745460880079 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888695279235 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148373545994 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10560014041 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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