In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area.
What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?
In the past, almost people lived in small communities such as small villages or small towns where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, when the standard of living is improved more than before, large number of people live in large cities, but in this place, they only know a few people in their area. In my opinion, living in a small community had some advantages and disadvantages, so living in a large city does.
Firstly, the lightest advantage when we live in a small village that people there very friendly, they always ready to help everyone, especially for tourists from another places. The second advantage, that we can see easily, is there is very peaceful, the roads and streets are not crowded as in the cities. So there has not any traffic jams. This lead to a tiny amount of accident happening. People there usually walk or use bicycle as a popular transport, so the air in a small village is usually fresh. There are not any smoke from vehicles as in the cities so the health of people there is so good. Inhabitants in a small community will have a comfortable mental life, because they do not have to think so much about their life, this is the third advantage when we live in a small community. Almost people live there were pleasure with their life, so they live day by day easily, comfortably ans similarly.
In the other hand, there were some of disadvantages for living in a small community. The education, knowledge of inhabitants in a small village are not broadened like people live in a large city. This lead to a very bad consequence that the job opportunities are low, so the physical life of people there is low. There have not much modern condition and furniture as in the city, so the standard of living there will not good as in the cities.
In conclusion, living in a small community has both advantages and disadvantages, but the advantages are outweigh than drawbacks. People can live in anywhere if they feel comfortable and that place is suitable with their hobbies and their life conditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the disadvantages') or simply say ''some disadvantages''.
Suggestion: some of the disadvantages; some disadvantages
...milarly. In the other hand, there were some of disadvantages for living in a small community. The ed...
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Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
...d disadvantages, but the advantages are outweigh than drawbacks. People can live in anyw...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, similarly, so, third, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6918767507 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6326479216 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445378151261 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2371901826 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5294117647 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.481819458663 0.244688304435 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161272717048 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119774948672 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.332337291727 0.151304729494 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13289576394 0.056905535591 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.