Some people feel that playing computer games has a negative impact on children's health and social skills. Others say that it has a positive impact. Discuss both views.
Technology has gone through unprecedented advancement. Furthermore, it is common for each household to have one computer, and it is popular among all ages, especially young children. In this essay, I will discuss how computer games could have undesirable effects on children’s psychological dependence and social development and the possible methods for parents to prevent it.
What are the negative effects? Firstly, it leads to serious gaming addiction, which may result in children neglecting their self-care and schoolwork, which could affect their health and grades. A recent survey found more children having sight problems due to long exposure to the computer screen. Another point is, that video games usually cause poor social development due to reduced physical contact, including spending less time with friends and family. It is common to see children glued to the screen instead of having playtime after school.
In view of this, parents need to play an active role in reducing these negative effects. As a start, putting screen time limits should be helpful in combating game addiction, so these children can do other beneficial activities such as playing with their friends and doing activities with their families. Moreover, it is also important to encourage more healthy activities such as sports, music or hobbies, to allow them to have wider options of fun activities other than computer games.
In conclusion, while our technology has evolved rapidly, it has also brought many unwanted effects of addiction and poor social development in our younger generations through computer games. I believe it is important for families to be educated on the negative impacts of gaming and the possible ways to curb it, before it's too late.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, may, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35379061372 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74506425391 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628158844765 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2067657289 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.076923077 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210597576318 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654910864761 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351877085183 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115043674461 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00585762587336 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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