College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The choice of selecting subjects for college students should be highly based on their interest rather than choosing the courses which are likely to have more jobs. The prompt recommends that students are not attacking this point and simply choosing a path that are most likely to lead to jobs. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this suggestion and argue that students look inward rather than outward when choosing college courses for two reasons.
To begin, the job market is shifting from one field to another , one can’t predict “What will happen when?”. In other words, job demand might change from one decade to other. Some area might be very successful right now and by end of the year it may vanish away by some new technology, so one should not focus not trending job courses. Let’s understand by a example, In today’s world computer related courses are getting very high preference over it was in 19th century, due to new inventions and technology’s. One who chooses computer field in 19th century due to his/her interest, though at that time field was not disseminate, might be getting more income than one who pursued college course in trendy job at that time. This illustrates that job market for future is highly not predictable based on present scenario, if one assumes that it is static he/she might get burned at some point in future.
Further if we still assume that job market is not dynamic, that is unchanging as gravity, one should look after his/her interest as key role and put everything aside as “Happiness is key to success”. For a student who is passionate about singing, if he/she pursuing computer engineering course might ruin his/her life. Daily going to work by waking up early, following routine and then going on desk to sit and think about singing whole time would be very terrifying. Simply by looking at singing wallpaper on desktop he/she doesn’t get satisfaction. Though he/she might complete his/her programming task haphazardly their is no such happiness in it. If some situation comes like events and he/she get opportunity to sing he/she would get very tons of happiness. So this tells workers with interest produce not only high amount of work but also would work fast.
However some argue that in this competing world it is better to choose practical paths rather than choosing interest. But this precisely says that choosing liking is better than blinding following trends as it has very high chances to get success. In our interest we can give more than hundred percent efforts which can’t be given to other side. People who ignore their interest leads to peril
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...et is shifting from one field to another , one can’t predict “What will happen whe...
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Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ending job courses. Let’s understand by a example, In today’s world computer rela...
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Line 3, column 618, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disseminated'.
Suggestion: disseminated
...rest, though at that time field was not disseminate, might be getting more income than one ...
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Line 3, column 892, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...c he/she might get burned at some point in future. Further if we still assume that job...
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Line 5, column 258, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'pursues'.
Suggestion: pursues
... is passionate about singing, if he/she pursuing computer engineering course might ruin ...
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Line 5, column 552, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...esktop he/she doesn’t get satisfaction. Though he/she might complete his/her programmi...
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Line 5, column 618, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...te his/her programming task haphazardly their is no such happiness in it. If some sit...
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Line 5, column 699, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
... situation comes like events and he/she get opportunity to sing he/she would get ve...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...t of work but also would work fast. However some argue that in this competing world...
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Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to interest'
Suggestion: to interest
...se practical paths rather than choosing interest. But this precisely says that choosing ...
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Line 7, column 157, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to like'.
Suggestion: to like
.... But this precisely says that choosing liking is better than blinding following trend...
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Line 7, column 287, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
.... In our interest we can give more than hundred percent efforts which can’t be given to...
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Line 7, column 394, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...who ignore their interest leads to peril
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, still, then, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2197.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 444.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9481981982 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47687550324 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529279279279 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.858371411 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.85 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20527304448 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668553471896 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677606637396 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149142032323 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950578234334 0.0667264976115 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.