The most effective way to understand contemporary culture is to analyze the trends of its youth.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented above.
Contemporary culture means beliefs or facts followed by people in present scenario. And to understand and implement the contemporary culture youth plays a very crucial rule. In today's world due to high technology with great competition, young's needs to give it's full effort for developing society. How to develop and grow society effectively? The answers to this question is reflected by these line " TO UNDERSTAND CONTEMPORARY CULTURE, ANA LYZE THE TRENDS OF YOUTH". In my opinion, I strongly believe with these lines for two reasons and argue that understanding youth will help us in many ways.
To begin with, if youth is providing new invention than it would not only beneficial for our nation but also for their personal satisfaction with getting more confident. In simple words this means that bringing good for something will almost lead the situation. For example, A young student of 18 years old is so much interested in cyber security, that in his early days he starts to read articles, watch videos and so on based on cyber security. Once his dad's company is under a great circumstances where all the data is corrupted and if he wants to access this data then he needs to pay $15000. The data is very important for that company as it has all workers attendance and many more things. Even after complaining in cyber crime and getting a specialist person who deals with cyber security. The data is not getting released, and his child comes to know by a phone call which his father gets. After few days that child finally brings data back by his skills and provides to his father. So this scenario tells us that, if young can be so intellectual in his early stage that after becoming mature he will lead to great success and so by trends of youth the contemporary culture is analyzed.
Furthermore, if young is not having getting chance to present their opinion or to follow their trends and they will not be as happy as they would with their interest. For example, a teenager working at some random company which does not provide him friendly environment due to boring monotonous talk of pervious decades then he/she would lead to leave that company as no surrounding supports his ideas or his interest. But if he is allowed to provide good amount of new cases or new invention that he would get so much interested and would might lead in future in that company by bringing great success.
However some argue that in this competing world it is better to choose practical paths rather than choosing trends of youth. But this precisely says that choosing trends of young to analyze contemporary culture is better than blinding following past cases as it may have high chances to get success then previous beliefs. This culture is followed more by young in coming years then past decades people so it would bring a great success to their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
... To begin with, if youth is providing new invention than it would not only beneficial for o...
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Line 3, column 654, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'workers'' or 'worker's'?
Suggestion: workers'; worker's
...mportant for that company as it has all workers attendance and many more things. Even a...
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Line 5, column 480, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
... to provide good amount of new cases or new invention that he would get so much interested an...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...t company by bringing great success. However some argue that in this competing world...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, for example, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 33.0505617978 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2374.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 495.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79595959596 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55377827767 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488888888889 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 721.8 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7622767843 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.047619048 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143935972359 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512980974723 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355716719178 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098312564963 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609646039867 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.