"Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state." -
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The argument refers to a contemporary topic which is highly relevant in today's age. I would like to begin that I fully agree with the stated argument, and believe that wilderness areas should be preserved & protected through the passing of legal laws, which are as strict as possible. In today's development-centric world, with its immense focus on industrialization & technological progress, it would seem that man is preoccupied with blind progress, literally pushing aside any other factors or obstacles in his way. Thus we see forests being cleared, wetlands being filled up, pristine coasts & b...
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Thanks for reviewing my
Thanks for reviewing my essay. I'd like to clarify something. When u say that the number of words here is a flaw - "less words in real exams", do you mean that the length of this essay should have been shorter?
If you can write 578 words in
If you can write 578 words in half an hour, that will be ok. Most of time it is a hard job. So we just remind you pay attention, maybe less words in real exams.
flaws:
No. of Words: 578 350 (less words in real exams)
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.265 0.35
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Score: 5.5 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 578 350
No. of Characters: 2872 1500
No. of Different Words: 288 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.903 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.969 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.839 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 205 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 155 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 99 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 70 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.083 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.118 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.542 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.265 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.502 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.084 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5