Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
We are living in a world which changes in so many aspects with rapid pace. These changes have had profound impacts on people's life style. Personally, I believe in the past it was much easier to anticipate future followed by different careers. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, as societies continue to change, they become more intricated. In the past, there were certain determined qualities which made people eligible for their jobs. Plus, once they got a job and they did put enough effort on it, it was unlikely to lose it. On the other hand, nowadays the requisite factors for an occupation are not crystal clear and competition for getting a good job is really intense. Hence, even if one person gets hired for a position, there is still a chance to lose it if someone with better resume and more skills shows up. Therefore, people should always keep acquiring new skills and knowledge.
Another significant reason is that today's people have propensity to take risks more than before. There are myriad role models who always talk about how they took risks and invested their money. In the past, people only knew their neighbors and a few successful people who were relevant to them. These days, however, social media made it possible to get familiar with more prosperous faces and the sequence of events which directed them toward success. All these information inclines people toward taking risks and starting their own business. Establishing a business can lead to failure any time, thus it doesn't have secure and determined future. My friend's experience is a compelling example of this. After she got intrigued by social media, she decided to use all her savings on a restaurant. However, Corona virus prevailed rampantly and most of the restaurants got bankrupted. Predicting a deadly contagious virus was virtually impossible.
In conclusion, uncertainty is a side effect of world development. Competition over good positions and different skills required for a job make it almost hard to maintain status-que in profession life. Additionally, today's people are highly inspired to initiate their own business and it will be followed by vague future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, really, so, still, therefore, thus, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0352303523 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65284385355 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628726287263 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5046653544 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.7826086957 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0434782609 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82608695652 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122233545798 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318061831612 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352222224562 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704263678815 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279743175917 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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