Your local newspapers would like to have a new regular weekly feature on a subject of interest for readers. Readers are being encouraged to make suggestions sent in an email to the newspaper.
Write an email to the newspaper. In your email, suggest a topic that you think would be popular, say why it would be of interest, explain why it is more relevant/interesting than other topics.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this to provide my valuable inputs for your novice periodic coverage in your newspaper.
I really appreciate your idea in having this type of a request to your readers to express their subject of interest. After an in-depth analysis, I would like you to feature a weekly coverage on ‘ways of reducing human carbon footprints’. As you know, this topic is of greater significance in this contemporary world.
Since this world face a critical environmental threat these days, I opine it is high time to publish this sort of global issue in your printed edition to create an awareness among people. Further, I assert that this ‘carbon footprint’ topic would be very beneficial for the society, as a rising number of people are more vulnerable to health effects due to pollution created by human activities.
I hope that my suggestion would be of some use. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Krrish
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Since this world face a critical environmental threat these days, I opine it is high time to publish this sort of global issue
Since this world faces a critical environmental threat these days, I opine it is the high time to publish this sort of global issue
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need to argue why ' it is more relevant/interesting than other topics.'
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 163 200
No. of Characters: 768 1000
No. of Different Words: 110 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.573 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.712 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.621 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 58 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 41 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 23 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.3 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.422 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.3 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.356 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.768 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.132 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4