Should smoking be banned completely?
It is undeniable that is the smoking has innumerable negetive effects, whereas most people smoked every day on the earth. Some individuals argued that it is should be ristrict and i agree with said notion and this essay will articulate my point of view in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Smoking is impact harmful to the human body. To elaborate it, it is caused number of diseases such as lung infection, asthma as well as neck cancer. Moreover, smoking is not only resposible for these disorders, but also affect the both active and passive smokers. To epitome, former one is infected by taking smoking, while latter one is contaminated by inhail the smoking polluted air. So, that is why, regime must be prohibited it.
On the flip side, government can implement the strict rule to ban the smoking in their region. Firstly, authorities can aware the pupils in thier schools by organise the awareness seminars. Secondly, regime not only make authenthic rules for residents, but also take strict action against cigrates or tabbaco maunfacutrers. Finally, it should be ristricted on public places such as parks or schools by law makers. Hence, smoking can be banned by following these steps.
To conclude, I strongly recomended that smoking must be prohibited due to its hazardous effects and it would be possible by following formentioned measurements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15384615385 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80578745349 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656108597285 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0101537323 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6153846154 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341283468974 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10873354127 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856398179377 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190678994939 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388159745558 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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