The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The given multi-line chart depicts the number of shops that have opened and closed during the period of 2011 to 2018.
Overall, the maximum number of shops that were opened was in the year 2011, while for closures it was 2013.
To commence with year 2011, the number of shops that were opened was higher than closures by a factor of 2000. Furthermore, in case of openings there is a dramatic fall and rise observed in 2012 and 2013, and the rise continues until 2014 and reaches a value of approximately 6000. This is followed by a dip to 4000 in 2015. Up until 2017, the trend is quite stagnant and falls to 3000 in 2018.
The trend in closures has also seen a lot of ups and downs over the 8 years. There is a gradual rise in numbers from 2011 to 2013, marking the highest value ever. The upcoming years have seen a gradual drop and eventually fell to ground in 2015 to a value of less than 1000. Surprisingly, this fall was fallowed by a steep rise to 5000 in 2016 and has remain almost unchanged till 2018.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e opened and closed during the period of 2011 to 2018. Overall, the maximum n...
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Line 7, column 353, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...by a steep rise to 5000 in 2016 and has remain almost unchanged till 2018.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34031413613 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23289682685 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528795811518 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7733123135 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251840327135 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101114656843 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114733340252 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194880190839 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973968644427 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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