Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Others people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are ore important than history.
Discuss both of the views and give your opinion.
School is a place where students are introduced to variety of subjects that help them gain self-awareness and knowledge about their surroundings. But at times, a debate is sparked among people about importance of some subjects relatively to other, like some people think that history is one of most important subject, while others are of the opinion that subjects related to Science and Technology hold a higher value than history. This essay will discuss both of the perspectives.
History is the study of past, the kind of practises followed by our ancestors across different parts of the world. This includes information about food, lifestyle, diseases, economy, technology and architecture because of which it is important for upcoming generations to study it and concepts learnt from history forms the basis of today. developments. For instance, looking back at one of the famous civilisations that resided in the norther parts of what we today call as India has formed the basis of modern sewage and drainage system systems across the world. Also, studying about the architecture and lifestyle provides us with answers about why and how a country follows certain traditions and culture. Nevertheless, the past gives an insight on what kind of failures were experienced, which intern will help avoid the same mistakes in the future.
On the other hand, with the advent of technology the circumstances that we face today are quite different from the past because of which the relatability factor is diminishing. Today we have modern problems like pollution, over-population that hardly existed back then. Such problems would require innovative solutions, which can be drawn from fields of science and technology. Furthermore, a wider perspective is achieved which gives us a better hold of future. For instance, the space discoveries and research carried out has given a deeper view into our galaxy and our existence. This helps us to see what the future holds for us and if we are ready to face it.
Lastly, after a deeper view of both the perspectives, I am of the opinion that subjects like science definitely are the most important when compared to history.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, lastly, look, nevertheless, so, then, while, as for, for instance, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16147308782 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87278105334 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555240793201 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1272724218 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.466666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344870447124 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916058904005 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129701673745 0.0667982634062 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226817202913 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159868166855 0.056905535591 281% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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