As well as making money businesses also have social responsibilities To what extent do you agree or disagree

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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Making money is important to any organization, but earning profit should not be the only motive. It's also necessary for businesses to have social responsibilities and I completely agree with the given statement.

The first reason for supporting my idea is that businesses must make money in order to survive. It costs companies lots of money to run the business. They have to pay employees' wages, cost of raw materials, cost of land rent, pay utility bills, etc... Moreover, if they want to remain successful, they have to invest in their improvements and innovations so as meet the changing needs of customers. In short, organizations need to make money to maintain and grow their business.

In addition to maximizing profit, companies should make a positive contribution to society. To retain good employees, businesses need to treat them well, rather than exploiting them to ensure that they have a good quality of life. Companies which focus on their profit only and the sole aim of maximizing profit can be infamous in the eyes of partners and society. To build a good reputation, businesses need to use a proportion of their profits to support local charities, environmental projects or education initiatives. Besides, they have to conform to the rules of the tax system, or else they will face the punishment of the law.

In conclusion, businesses should assume social responsibilities as well as making money. I'm in favor of the idea that taking social responsibilities can provide an organization both profits and a good reputation. If there are many such companies, society will develop well both economically and socially.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...sponsibilities as well as making money. Im in favor of the idea that taking social...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, in short, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15355805243 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09273050471 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573033707865 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.888576674 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.7333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265613992607 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960101509865 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986659356019 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184470074404 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801192184681 0.056905535591 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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