Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Dancing plays an important role in a culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Every culture has its unique way of celebration but for sure they include dance. Dance is not only a performance , its more of showing expressing emotions, its the vibe of culture, celebration of occasion. Dance plays a crucial role in a culture and in a numerous way. There are several reasons to hold this opinion and I will illustrate them in the below paragraphs.
To begin with, every nation has its own culture and its own way of celebrating occasion but I believe dance is the keystone for making that celebration memorable. When we talk about traditional dance, then that are performed in the same way till they were discovered. Everything remain the same, like the dresses, dancing step, crowd and many other aspects. Lets take an example of Folk dance, they are so special and they are necessary for showing culture values. The steps of dance people include has some meaning there. India is a country of diverse culture and it has a different dance form for different nation and people perform dance in specific way only, although they know other forms also but even small kids adopt dance form from very starting because they sees the same performance every year and because of multiple repeatation they might admit that this is important to learn. So, in Rajasthan people perform different dance where the songs choosen are different whereas in south the dance and song are different and both illustrate their culture, language, origin of art. This way to remain connected with culture dance plays a crucial role.
Furthermore, we can consider that there are otherways by we can be in touch with culture like reading books, watching traditional or cultural movies but I believe that attachment would be different from the people feels from dance. In a contemporary world we can assume that people are not much attached to the culture. Whereas its need is must. People are growing in a certain way that they have no value for their roots. which I feel is not a correct approach of living because when we get older our kids will ask us about origin and culture and if we don't have sufficient knowledge we won't able to pass to our kids. So, to be in touch with our culture, we should attend the cultural events where every ceremony performed ritually and people perform the specific dance art. For example, one of my cousin who lives in Bombay and she has no knowledge about the basic culture so whenever she comes to jodhpur, I takes her to the religious place and when she comes in the time of festival I make her to follow all the religion so that se can understand the importance of specific step. So, to connect new generation with culture they should attend the festivals and perform the dance because it has certain significance.
To put it in nutshell, every culture is important and people should remain attached to their culture and as dance is crucial for every celebration people should remain attached to culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, whereas, for example, i feel, to begin with, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2439.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 509.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79174852652 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74984508646 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48263558159 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451866404715 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 783.9 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.2723041833 48.9658058833 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.142857143 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2380952381 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176507701936 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637897386742 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592895025736 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116327673862 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254526183734 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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