In many cities, there is a lack of space to develop and as a result, in order to modernize, old buildings are demolished and replaced with new buildings.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of knocking down old buildings?
space: pre-wrap;">In this day and age, with the rapid growth in the world’s population, finding enough space to erect new skyscrapers and high-tech buildings has been a gigantic problem, considering the tiny amount of land the earth offers. one solution has been put forward, which is to demolish the former buildings and replace them with modern ones. this essay is aimed to shed light on the merits and demerits of this way of resolving the issue.
space: pre-wrap;">On the one hand, undeniably, knocking down buildings which have run out of fashion does have some significant benefits. Limiting the amount of money spent on constructing is one of the major advangtages, as buying, along with seeking for space to introduce up-to-date establishments requires a huge amount of cash and effort. furthermore, myriad old buildings are extremely fragile and sometimes act as a hazard to the local citizens. removing them and building modern ones would not only upgrade citydwellers’ life, due to the variety of facilities it offers, but it would also increase the safety of their neighborhood.
space: pre-wrap;">On the other hand, in spite of the merits mentioned above, there are still certain drawbacks of demolishing old buildings. Firstly, in the case that those old buildings contain historical values, pulling it down would be equal to destroying a historical site or maybe, a city’s identity. For example, if a city is known for having the first theatre in the world, it being torn down also means that the city no longer has that identity. furthermore, provided that those old buildings boost the region’s tourism, removing those would lower the rate of potiental visitors to that region.
space: pre-wrap;">In conclusion, there are certain drawbacks to flatten an ancient building and erect a new one, as well as benefits. Thus, considering these two aspects and making wise decisions eventually comes down to the hand of the local goverment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, still, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34920634921 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24254906896 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584126984127 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5548791744 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.615384615 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312144769247 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10572426131 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595683432267 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180280728919 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399469488886 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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