Children should be never educated at home by their parent. Do you agree or disagree
In the modren world child need a parental support in order to join " the real world " However many feel that kid should be taugh at home by their parent. I disagree with those people who think that kid should be educated by real teacher who works at school , kindgarden , university. I will give some reason to support my answer.
To begin with, parents are also teachers who can teach their how to walk , speak , ride. bicycle. They with a great patient pass down aknowledge their kid. The most children first wish i to be look like their father or mother because they are sure that their parents do only right thing. In general, parents have the most strongest impact on their child's life.
Unfortuantly every child is not born by smart and educated partens. hense children need a real teacher who knows deeply social subjects. Children will be aware of overseas life, culture by help of teachers. It is undeniable fact that real teacher plays a pivotal role in child's life who is growing up.
In conclusion , children should be educated at home until they reach suitable age to go to a school.
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Sentence: In the modren world
Sentence: In the modren world child need a parental support in order to join ' the real world '
Description: The fragment child need a is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace child with children
Sentence: They with a great patient pass down aknowledge their kid.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a preposition
Suggestion: Refer to They and with
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by a determiner, possessive
Suggestion: Refer to aknowledge and their
Sentence: In the modren world child need a parental support in order to join ' the real world '
Error: modren Suggestion: modern
Sentence: However many feel that kid should be taugh at home by their parent.
Error: taugh Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: They with a great patient pass down aknowledge their kid.
Error: aknowledge Suggestion: acknowledge
Sentence: Unfortuantly every child is not born by smart and educated partens. hense children need a real teacher who knows deeply social subjects.
Error: Unfortuantly Suggestion: Unfortunately
Error: hense Suggestion: hence
Error: partens Suggestion: parents
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Score: 2.5 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 193 350
No. of Characters: 873 1500
No. of Different Words: 123 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.727 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.523 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.202 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 55 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 40 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 21 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 7 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.083 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.804 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.417 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.345 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.588 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.049 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
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