Many people are working longer hours. Why is this happening? What problems can this cause to people?
Nowadays, It has been observed that people spend more time in the office rather than at home. This essay will discuss the reasons for this development which include industrialisation and human desires. It will also suggest solutions that are possible to adapt for an individual.
There are majorly two reasons for this problem. One of them is the rapid industrialisation over the past few years which have impacted companies to change their way of working. Working hours at the workplace has increased than before because of the workload to achieve the targets. For instance, sales executives work more than standard hours to achieve monthly targets set by their management. Another reason is that people are becoming a part of the rat race to earn more money and buy their desired materials such as car, house, and electronic gadgets; as a result, they end up working extra hours to earn compensation. Thus it can be said that these two factors are the reasons for this trend.
Because of the aforesaid reasons, employees can face detrimental effects in their personal life. Working on a computer for long hours can damage eye sights and may cause stress. Moreover, this also creates a gap between families as working professionals do not get much time to spend with their family. For example, if an employee is working on a project and he has a timeline to submit the project within a timeframe, then he will work even after working hours are over and would not be able to give time to children
To conclude, the company staff is spending more time at the workplace in order to achieve goals and fulfil personal desires by earning money for extra time which is causing harm to their health and personal life. However, such an issue can be controlled if employers promote standard working time.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r the past few years which have impacted companies to change their way of working...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...rking extra hours to earn compensation. Thus it can be said that these two factors a...
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Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesights'.
Suggestion: eyesights
...on a computer for long hours can damage eye sights and may cause stress. Moreover, this al...
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Line 5, column 518, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uld not be able to give time to children To conclude, the company staff is spendi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87947882736 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60741810287 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560260586319 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.1839304707 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230783010836 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851938971679 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502414383613 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138042489717 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517530334933 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r the past few years which have impacted companies to change their way of working...
^^
Line 3, column 626, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...rking extra hours to earn compensation. Thus it can be said that these two factors a...
^^^^
Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesights'.
Suggestion: eyesights
...on a computer for long hours can damage eye sights and may cause stress. Moreover, this al...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 518, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uld not be able to give time to children To conclude, the company staff is spendi...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87947882736 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60741810287 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560260586319 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.1839304707 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230783010836 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851938971679 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502414383613 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138042489717 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517530334933 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.