Dear Mr. or Madam,
I am writing this letter in regard to express my interest to apply for the job vacancy in the Museum. I come across to your advertisement which is published by Times newspaper two days ago and I found it great opportunity to be a part of your team.
My name is David and I am a 25 years computer science student who is eager to expand his knowledge about local history and ancient culture. I have been living in the city for 20 years and currently I am continuing my education at Birmingham university.
As I gained considerable skills in technology and especially digital area, I am able to promote your business in a short period by using modern tools such as digital marketing and having a comprehensive website.
Since I am living alone and have no plan to spend quality time with my family or close friends, I would like to dedicate my time to a job which brings value for local society and giving me a living income as well.
My working resume is enclosed and for further information please do not hesitate to cantact.
Yours Faithfully,
David
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, such as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56701030928 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70590572927 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649484536082 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9131893441 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.75 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00563941184476 0.244688304435 2% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0033727430991 0.084324248473 4% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00892343947634 0.0667982634062 13% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00539638895857 0.151304729494 4% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107927779171 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, such as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56701030928 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70590572927 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649484536082 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9131893441 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.75 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00563941184476 0.244688304435 2% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0033727430991 0.084324248473 4% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00892343947634 0.0667982634062 13% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00539638895857 0.151304729494 4% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107927779171 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.