The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
The youth of any country is its future. The advancement of any nation is largely dependant on the betterment of its young generation.The author here puts forward a proposition that the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation rather than competition. It is any nation's moral responsibility as a whole to develop their youth in a way so that they can prepare themselves for leadership in any field they choose to persue in future. For doing so I completely agree with the author that the youth should be indulged in cooperative behavior rather than competition.
Any organisation be it a private enterprise or a government one shines only when the people building the organisation have an united urge to do good for the company. Such kind of efficacy comes only when there is mutual respect and cooperation among the employees of an organisation. It is thus evident in order to imbibe such a behavior in our future generation they should be trained from very young age to have mutual cooperation among their peers. As for example in schools across nations there are group projects given to the students to teach them the importance of cooperation. Not only projects, regular class assignments are also given in groups for this reason. This exercise not only makes the children more complaint with their peers but also helps them identify their leadership traits. In any school group projects there is at least one child who has this innate tendancy to lead the team and also provide solution to any kind of disharmony among the team members. While others in the team learn how to unitedly work towards the same goal. This practise of mutual tolerance and unity helps to develop an integral character in the young generation which manifests in their future to be a good team player and even serve as a leader for the organisation.
Not only in academics these kinds of group activities are largely encouraged by the parents these days. Participating in group events and social functions helps to develop a mutual harmony in the young people. It makes them think on a bigger scale and not just for one ownself helping to develop a leadership quality. A leader is a person who thinks on behalf of the entire team and takes responsibility for the entire team and not just for their ownself. Engaging in group activities thus helps them to think for the entire group and bring out the leadership quality in them.
However, many a times it has been questioned whether a competitve attitiude can be more relied in making of a good leader than a cooperative attitude. It is most likely possible that in any group activity in school there are two kids in the same group who would like to take charge of the entire group and in that case a competition may arise asking who is the better leader. Encouraging a competitive attitude at that time would only increase the tension in the group not doing any good. However, if the children are explained that they should look for the greater good of the group and harmonously come to an conclusion it will be doing an ultimate good to the group. This can be thought in the bigger picture that in any government the people running the government, i.e, the leaders must always be open to constructive critisicm from their peers and not try to vie with each other. Thus a cooperative behavior will help in building a better society rather than a competitve society.
In conclusion there are instances where one might argue that a competitve attitude helps to bring out the leader in one but that would ultimately result in a disharmonous organisation in particular and society in general. It is the cooperation among every one in a society and taking care of that harmony, unity and integrity which makes the organisation or the society a success. Thus it is our moral duty to imbibe the younger generation with values of cooperation rather than competition to build the leadership quality in them.The youth of any country is its future. The advancement of any nation is largely dependant on the betterment of its young generation.The author here puts forward a proposition that the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation rather than competition. It is any nation's moral responsibility as a whole to develop their youth in a way so that they can prepare themselves for leadership in any field they choose to persue in future. For doing so I completely agree with the author that the youth should be indulged in cooperative behavior rather than competition.
Any organisation be it a private enterprise or a government one shines only when the people building the organisation have an united urge to do good for the company. Such kind of efficacy comes only when there is mutual respect and cooperation among the employees of an organisation. It is thus evident in order to imbibe such a behavior in our future generation they should be trained from very young age to have mutual cooperation among their peers. As for example in schools across nations there are group projects given to the students to teach them the importance of cooperation. Not only projects, regular class assignments are also given in groups for this reason. This exercise not only makes the children more complaint with their peers but also helps them identify their leadership traits. In any school group projects there is at least one child who has this innate tendancy to lead the team and also provide solution to any kind of disharmony among the team members. While others in the team learn how to unitedly work towards the same goal. This practise of mutual tolerance and unity helps to develop an integral character in the young generation which manifests in their future to be a good team player and even serve as a leader for the organisation.
Not only in academics these kinds of group activities are largely encouraged by the parents these days. Participating in group events and social functions helps to develop a mutual harmony in the young people. It makes them think on a bigger scale and not just for one ownself helping to develop a leadership quality. A leader is a person who thinks on behalf of the entire team and takes responsibility for the entire team and not just for their ownself. Engaging in group activities thus helps them to think for the entire group and bring out the leadership quality in them.
However, many a times it has been questioned whether a competitve attitiude can be more relied in making of a good leader than a cooperative attitude. It is most likely possible that in any group activity in school there are two kids in the same group who would like to take charge of the entire group and in that case a competition may arise asking who is the better leader. Encouraging a competitive attitude at that time would only increase the tension in the group not doing any good. However, if the children are explained that they should look for the greater good of the group and harmonously come to an conclusion it will be doing an ultimate good to the group. This can be thought in the bigger picture that in any government the people running the government, i.e, the leaders must always be open to constructive critisicm from their peers and not try to vie with each other. Thus a cooperative behavior will help in building a better society rather than a competitve society.
In conclusion there are instances where one might argue that a competitve attitude helps to bring out the leader in one but that would ultimately result in a disharmonous organisation in particular and society in general. It is the cooperation among every one in a society and taking care of that harmony, unity and integrity which makes the organisation or the society a success. Thus it is our moral duty to imbibe the younger generation with values of cooperation rather than competition to build the leadership quality in them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
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Auxiliary verbs: 28.0 12.4196629213 225% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 40.0 14.8657303371 269% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 40.0 11.3162921348 353% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 104.0 33.0505617978 315% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 190.0 58.6224719101 324% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 60.0 12.9106741573 465% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 6708.0 2235.4752809 300% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 1397.0 442.535393258 316% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80171796707 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 6.11362929708 4.55969084622 134% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7398087111 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 215.323595506 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.204008589835 0.4932671777 41% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 2172.6 704.065955056 309% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
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Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5453560512 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.566037736 118.986275619 106% => OK
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Discourse Markers: 2.62264150943 5.21951772744 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
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Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.086092623792 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105350225835 0.0758088955206 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193275081747 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125482255909 0.0667264976115 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.37 8.38706741573 76% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 100.480337079 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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