Even though globalization affects the world’s economy in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"
In this day and age, people can easily see the influence that globalization has on the economy all over the globe. While some suppose that it has many advantages, others believe that its disadvantages should not be ignored. I totally agree that globalization has both positive and negative aspects.
On the one hand, globalization contributes to the world’s economy in many beneficial ways. First of all, globalization helps traveling between different countries become much easier. It is because globalization is often accompanied with a number of economic development cooperation agreements between countries that allow the movement of people and goods to be less complicated and more convenient. For example, if people want to visit different European nations, they only need to apply for a visa of one country which complies with the EU's Schengen Agreement. This reduces much time completing immigration procedures and travel expenses for oversea students, workers or tourists. Furthermore, globalization allows companies to find new, specialized talent that is not available in their market. It is the fact that, in the century of globalization, multinational companies almost dominate the economy by exploiting benefits from many different countries including human resources. Besides, governments of some developed countries also cooperate with these enterprises to attract high-quality human resources from many other countries to serve their countries in many ways such as scholarships or high salaries.
On the other hand, it can not be denied that globalization has detrimental effects. Firstly, globalization could lead to numerous challenges in terms of managing immigration. Because of expanded immigration policies of many nations with the aim of boosting the economy, the illegal imigration rate and the rate of crime coming from abroad is likely to increase, which can put a tremendous burden on the governments as well as force them to add more financial and human resources to ensure social security. In addition, in the age of globalization, it is more challenging for many countries to face the brain drain phenomenon, especially developing countries. This is because developed countries easily attract talent with higher wages, better quality of life and more attractive social welfare.
In conclusion, although globalization shows numerous benefits, its drawbacks are inevitable. People can take the advantages of globalization to travel all over the world to find good schools to study or get a good job in the international working environment. However, the government should be aware of the risk of over immigration as well as brain drain.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to travel' or 'travel'.
Suggestion: to travel; travel
...ways. First of all, globalization helps traveling between different countries become much...
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Line 3, column 932, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...the economy by exploiting benefits from many different countries including human resources. Be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, as for, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2271.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56617647059 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17989463088 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 720.9 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8053317425 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.526315789 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4736842105 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.47368421053 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132815834568 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523256223504 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517663050792 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104379712343 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650633167498 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.