A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at a universtiy
Dear X,
I recieved your letter a bit late as last week was a holiday. I am writing you so you can have some information about the course, the university and the application process.
First of all, the course I studied was care prof offered either in the week ends morning or evening the one in the morning goes around 7 am to 1 pm Saturday while the one in the evening is from 1.00 om to 7.00 pm Sunday. The whole course is 3 months. they are always taught by the best nurses, that's really motivating.
As the second point the university is nearby your hometown the cost is something you can pay by 3 installments or they'll provide you other payments options as well they are very keen with assignments, I really recommend you the institution.
In order to fill the application you just call them for the registration and they will provide you a code, she'll let you know the coure starting dat as well.
If you need future the information please call me
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 251, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...m Sunday. The whole course is 3 months. they are always taught by the best nurses, t...
^^^^
Line 4, column 294, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...y are always taught by the best nurses, thats really motivating. As the second point...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they'll
...ething you can pay by 3 installments or theyll provide you other payments options as w...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r the registration and they will provide you a code, shell let you know the coure...
^^
Line 6, column 109, Rule ID: HELL[3]
Message: Did you mean 'she'll'?
Suggestion: she'll
...tion and they will provide you a code, shell let you know the coure starting dat as ...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 159, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ou know the coure starting dat as well. If you need future the information please...
^^^
Line 7, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tarting dat as well. If you need future the information please call me
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, second, so, well, while, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44632768362 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56346554746 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632768361582 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.328556928 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.375 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 4.34317383033 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178411213173 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737383108901 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449579657215 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947936990682 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372079773592 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 251, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...m Sunday. The whole course is 3 months. they are always taught by the best nurses, t...
^^^^
Line 4, column 294, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...y are always taught by the best nurses, thats really motivating. As the second point...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they'll
...ething you can pay by 3 installments or theyll provide you other payments options as w...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r the registration and they will provide you a code, shell let you know the coure...
^^
Line 6, column 109, Rule ID: HELL[3]
Message: Did you mean 'she'll'?
Suggestion: she'll
...tion and they will provide you a code, shell let you know the coure starting dat as ...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 159, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ou know the coure starting dat as well. If you need future the information please...
^^^
Line 7, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tarting dat as well. If you need future the information please call me
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, second, so, well, while, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44632768362 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56346554746 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632768361582 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.328556928 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.375 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 4.34317383033 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178411213173 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737383108901 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449579657215 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947936990682 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372079773592 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.