Globalization has brought about more positive economic impacts than negative ones.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
It has been said that globalisation has led to great fruitful outcomes compared to the disadvantages it caused. I somehow agreed to this notion which I like to explain in the next paragraphs.
To commence with, globalisation offers enormous benefits to the nations. Firstly, the demand and availability of various goods and services have increased as one could avail any type of product at any place which ultimately removes the location barrier for receiving facilities. secondly, this approach creates competition among counterparts which enable the several organisations to develop or design products better in quality, size, shape than the other competitors. In other words, companies incur huge amount of expenses on advertisements, design, packaging and to make the improved brand image in order to receive attention from the customers while providing the masses what they want which eventually surges the flow of income in the country. For instance, the brands such as Nike, Puma have generated tremendous types of equipment related to shoes and clothes which have been fancy by the individuals due to their unique style and persuade them to pay even high price for that kind of goods and services.
However, this policy might not free from the drawbacks. To start with, the competition which has been produced by the growth and development put heavy pressure on distributors to fabricate resources which are more valuable compared to its counterparts in which issues and disputes might arise, thus the chances of exploitation by the superiors to the inferior markets will be more. For example, the big corporations like Apple and Samsung enjoy a huge monopoly over their packages and exploit inferior brands like Redmi and Oppo which deter them to copy their designs.
To conclude, no doubt many advancements have taken place owing to growth which removes location plague. Although, colossal competition between other organisation generates some troubles related to exploitation and monopoly charged by large companies over smaller one's which further reduce growth and harmony among nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, kind of, no doubt, such as, in other words, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4103343465 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81820784069 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623100303951 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.4082922724 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.333333333 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4166666667 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4166666667 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0727725944797 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0303363265352 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273992058111 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0452845329163 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156082107292 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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