You have an appointment with your manager the next day. Write a letter telling him/her what you are going to discuss in the meeting.
In your letter, you should tell:
- what you have done for the company in the year you worked there?
- what changes you would like to recommend?
- what training you require?
Dear Steve,
I would like to tell you that I am working as an assistant manager finance in this organization for last 5 years and I am handling the accounts of the entire office which includes income tax returns, annual filing, book keeping and banking. I am writing this letter to inform you about the agenda of tomorrow's meeting.
I would like to draw your attention towards a few changes in my department which are necessary to improve our day to day accounting. In order to maintain full fledged books, we need a better software as Tally prime is not suitable for large organizations like us. Apart from this, I would suggest some new recruitments in my team to strengthen our database management.
Despite inclusion of an upgraded accounting software, advance excel training is required for finance department including myself. It will not only enhance the analytical skills of employees but also be beneficial for preparation and maintenance of expense tracker. Looking forward for a fruitful meeting tomorrow.
Thanks and regards
Roger
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n this organization for last 5 years and I am handling the accounts of the entire...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...out the agenda of tomorrows meeting. I would like to draw your attention towar...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, then, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14534883721 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84146530766 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.720930232558 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.455317361 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211775645211 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692362847272 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07061184593 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124915335296 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871465451534 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 7.59969072165 129% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.