The line graph represents how many foreigners visiting the coast, the mountains and the lakes in a specific nation in Europe from 1987 to 2007.
Overall, the number of international tourists choosing these three areas as their destination for their holiday was higher and higher. Among them, the coast was the most attractive tourist attraction over the years shown except the year 2022.
In 1987, starting at 40.000, the coast attracted the highest number of people, which was 4 times higher than that of the lakes. From 1987 to 1992, while there was a slight decrease in the quantity of travelers to the coast, the opposite trend was for the lakes. From 1992 onwards, the coast witnessed a dramatic rise to about 75 thousand in 2007 and became the most favorite destination of the foreign visitors. On the contrary, after enormous jump and reaching the peak at about 75 thousand visitors, the lakes experienced a steeply drop to 50 thousand in 2007.
With reference to the mountains, in 1987 the mountain ranked the second after the coast in the number of foreign travelers with 20 thousand. Over the period of 20 years, there was a considerable fluctuation in this figure. In the final year, It lost its favor and became the least favorite destination of people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 524, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('steeply') instead an adjective, or a noun ('drop') instead of another adjective.
...housand visitors, the lakes experienced a steeply drop to 50 thousand in 2007. With reference...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, while, as for, on the contrary, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88425925926 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55853540039 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.3540146442 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.5 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114420204153 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453980570513 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393310327422 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074662663172 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240530156632 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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