Films can tell us a lot about the country where they were made. What have you learned about a country from watching its movies? Use specific examples and details to support your response.
Film, a type of art showing what topic the director want to talk about, has been valued and even triggers a heated discussion over what people can learn about a country through watching it. In many people's view, only the scene in the movie can we know a country. My perspective is that we can also find a lot of funny fact from the story tells by the film, due to the contributions to the staff's study and research on the local documentations.
What must be prioritized is that the look of a movie. To begin with, buildings include may provide us many informations about the country. What kind of the environment they live, what is the development stage it is, what the climate there may be...etc. To be more specific, by concluding the clues of these informations, we can depict a mimic image of where the habitants live in. Additionally, we may also notice the nature in the movie. In detail, the surrounding of the characters can convey what kind of situation there. For example, if most of scenes in the movie are in rainy day, we may induce that the country may have a lot of rainy day, and the air there must be very wet.
What is equally worth discussing is that the story of the movie. Initially, the plot may have some of the history in the place. Specifically, a local history can give a great inspiration to the story construction of the film. For example, Manga, is one of the popular movie in Taiwan, and it included the local history that made the movie having great reflection to many people. Moreover, the myth also can have the same effect. To explain it further, it is a wonderful sauce to the movie that makes it even attractive to audience. The recent movie, Blessing, was base on the country's myth and religion, tells us the culture of the country.
The scene, the look of the movie, will provide us a real appearance of the country. The story, plot of the movie, dig into more deeper of a country's origin and people's behavior. In conclusion, only these two elements in the film can we learn about the whole aspect of the country.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 542, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the scenes') or simply say ''most scenes''.
Suggestion: most of the scenes; most scenes
...ind of situation there. For example, if most of scenes in the movie are in rainy day, we may i...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...the movie. Initially, the plot may have some of the history in the place. Specifically, a l...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...de us a real appearance of the country. The story, plot of the movie, dig into more...
^^^
Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'deeper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: deeper
... The story, plot of the movie, dig into more deeper of a countrys origin and peoples behavi...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51069518717 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5716101601 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478609625668 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1328730594 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.35 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304022779707 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792524104866 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564360907259 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183857189623 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549222647503 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 542, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the scenes') or simply say ''most scenes''.
Suggestion: most of the scenes; most scenes
...ind of situation there. For example, if most of scenes in the movie are in rainy day, we may i...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...the movie. Initially, the plot may have some of the history in the place. Specifically, a l...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...de us a real appearance of the country. The story, plot of the movie, dig into more...
^^^
Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'deeper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: deeper
... The story, plot of the movie, dig into more deeper of a countrys origin and peoples behavi...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51069518717 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5716101601 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478609625668 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1328730594 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.35 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304022779707 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792524104866 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564360907259 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183857189623 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549222647503 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.