The line graph gives information about the average price of each month payments for 4 mobile phone companies in a specific country in Europe over the period of 9 months in 2022.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that the average cost for Domo, Lex, Alph surged significantly. By contrast, Sim TX price plunged relatively over the period shown. In addition, the Alpha's monthly price was the cheapest at the beginning. However, it went up dramatically and become the most expensive brand.
In January, every customer had to pay 15 euro to be able to use Domo, the highest fee. While the bills for Alpha company was the lowest with only 5 euro. There was a relative stability in the price of Alpha company during the first 5 months before a jump to 25 euro in September, which made Alpha the most expensive kind of mobile contract. After having to pay the highest price during most of the time mentioned, Domo users witnessed a slight decrease to about 23 euro by September which stood after Alpha.
Starting about 12 euro in January, Lex was the second most expensive company in comparison with the other three. There was a soar in the monthly cost to 18 euro in September despite a significant fluctuate during the same period. During the first 6 months, the Sim TX grew up after that it reduced to about 8 euro in the last month of the period.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The line graph gives information about t...
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Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...n January, every customer had to pay 15 euro to be able to use Domo, the highest fee...
^^^^
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...lpha company was the lowest with only 5 euro. There was a relative stability in the ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
... the first 5 months before a jump to 25 euro in September, which made Alpha the most...
^^^^
Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...witnessed a slight decrease to about 23 euro by September which stood after Alpha. ...
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Line 4, column 19, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
... stood after Alpha. Starting about 12 euro in January, Lex was the second most exp...
^^^^
Line 4, column 157, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...re was a soar in the monthly cost to 18 euro in September despite a significant fluc...
^^^^
Line 4, column 310, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...rew up after that it reduced to about 8 euro in the last month of the period.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, while, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 241.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59336099585 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44896251499 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539419087137 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0145477451 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.25 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171120912924 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661106173987 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639496540977 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126061355329 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067082861586 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The line graph gives information about t...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...n January, every customer had to pay 15 euro to be able to use Domo, the highest fee...
^^^^
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...lpha company was the lowest with only 5 euro. There was a relative stability in the ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
... the first 5 months before a jump to 25 euro in September, which made Alpha the most...
^^^^
Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...witnessed a slight decrease to about 23 euro by September which stood after Alpha. ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 19, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
... stood after Alpha. Starting about 12 euro in January, Lex was the second most exp...
^^^^
Line 4, column 157, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...re was a soar in the monthly cost to 18 euro in September despite a significant fluc...
^^^^
Line 4, column 310, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...rew up after that it reduced to about 8 euro in the last month of the period.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, while, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 241.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59336099585 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44896251499 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539419087137 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0145477451 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.25 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171120912924 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661106173987 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639496540977 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126061355329 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067082861586 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.