Essay topic: The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakers in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The given line chart gives information about the annual income of three bakers over a 10-year period from 2000 to 2010. It is clear from the graph that there was an upward trend in Amandine Bakert and Bolo Cakery’s annual earnings whereas it was the opposite for Mari Bakeshop. In the first year, Bolo Bakery had the lowest income with only $20000 a year. In the next 3 years, there were erratic changes in Bolo Cakery’s yearly earnings with figure increased to $22000 and then dropped to just above $20000 and then bounced back to $40000. Between 2003 and 2006, Bolo Cakery’s annual earnings remained stable at approximately $40000. After that, it rose significantly to $41000 in 2007 and continued to grow dramatically to around $60000 in 2008 and in the last two year of the period, it increased slight by $1000. The annual income of Amandine Bakery started at $60000 in 2000 and the figure remained static for the first 5 years. After that, it rose steadily to approximately $70000 in 2007. In the next year, there was an acceleration of almost $3000 in Amandine Bakery’s yearly earnings and the figure continued to increase to $100500 in 2010. In contrast, Mari Bakeshop had the highest earnings out of 3 bakers in the first year. Between 2000 and 2001, the figure increased moderately to $95000. However, in the remaining years, it fall sharply to $40000 in 2008 and remained unchanged in the last two years
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1313, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'falls'?
Suggestion: falls
...00. However, in the remaining years, it fall sharply to 0000 in 2008 and remained un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, then, whereas, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 245.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68979591837 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46644790427 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477551020408 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5644206445 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11739714457 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521635084606 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574504745868 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11739714457 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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