The pie chart compares the destinations which Anthropology graduates from one university choose when they completed their undergraduate degree course and the table compares the income of those graduates after 5 years’ work.
Overall, the majority of graduates choose to work full-time while there are a small number of students who work part-time while attending their post-graduate course. Moreover, government sectors pay the highest salaries for those graduates.
After finishing their undergraduate course, over half of the students(52%) work full-time whereas 15% of graduates work part-time. However, there are also students, who choose to pursue their post-graduate degree, with 8% of them studying full-time, and 5% taking the course while doing part-time jobs. Unfortunately, 12% of graduates are found unemployed.
According to the table, 10% of graduates working in private companies but only 5% of them who are working in government sectors or as freelance consultants earn between $25,000 and $49,999. Although the income of over one-third of graduates in private companies is between $25000-$74999 and 40% of freelance consultants earn from $75000 to $99999, half of the graduates in government sectors earn the highest salary among them ($100000 and above).
- The money spent by governments on space programmes would be better spent on vital public services such as schools and hospitals To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
- The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
- Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees while others have free entry Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages 73
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...hoose to work full-time while there are a small number of students who work part-time while atten...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, third, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6387434555 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95775839946 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560209424084 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1916727109 43.030603864 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.625 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283514565296 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127166024065 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116284021299 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193341536384 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124653897074 0.0819641961636 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 11.4140731707 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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