There are times when we start a debate or discussion we will have to always choose a side which might be for or against. In such situations, some people will never agree to views which is against their views. I believe there are still people who still practice this and hate it when they have questioned their beliefs. I agree that such people never change their mindset and get aggressive in their actions.
There are many such beliefs that people wish to question but they never ask as the answer are always the same and they don't like to clarify it. For instance, the temples in India have a lot of traditions that are been followed from ancient times and are still being followed without any reason. When asked for reasons they either ignore the questions or are called secular. The people have become blind in fear of Gods and they don't question the actions that are followed.
Similarly, In small villages there are a lot of taboos still followed like child marriage, burning widow wife with the husband and not touching anything inside the house when in periods, etc. When questioned about the such belief they say it's a tradition followed by their ancestors and they are still being followed for respect and to continue their traditions and culture. This belief had some valid points in the old day but the time and place have changed.
Although, there are times when you question the view of a very knowledgeable person. They have accepted our views but they don't readily change their mindset without the evident facts. Scientist always changes their beliefs when discoveries are found. They question our belief to get the knowledge and fully accept the opposing views with open arms. But still, they do hesitate to fully agree with them.
In nutshell, I agree that controversial topics with opposite views are not accepted by many people they have a fixed mindset that doesn't change easily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'view'.
Suggestion: view
...ations, some people will never agree to views which is against their views. I believe...
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Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'peopled'.
Suggestion: peopled
... their views. I believe there are still people who still practice this and hate it whe...
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Line 2, column 120, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...the answer are always the same and they dont like to clarify it. For instance, the t...
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Line 2, column 429, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e become blind in fear of Gods and they dont question the actions that are followed....
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Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...estioned about the such belief they say its a tradition followed by their ancestors...
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Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ay but the time and place have changed. Although, there are times when you question the ...
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Line 4, column 123, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
.... They have accepted our views but they dont readily change their mindset without th...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...y people they have a fixed mindset that doesnt change easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, still, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 328.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80792682927 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23854202985 2.79657885939 80% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487804878049 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4937868532 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7647058824 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2941176471 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52941176471 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300842792246 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11263916733 0.0831039109588 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634619594751 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187353484735 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06307538684 0.0667264976115 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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