In some place. group of teenagers ocasionally cause problems by behaving badly. The reason? Solution?
As can be seen from the society nowaday, many teenagers are showing awful behaviors and causing lots of problem. Althought that is more and more popular and impacting badly to our life, there are several solutions to deal with this problem.
Is is generally accepted that our parents have to face with the pressure of finding money everyday so they spend almost of time to work. For this simple reason that makes children have less control and caring from parents. Thus, children can’t share problem and feel isolated in their family, that impact badly on thinking and mentality. For the long time, it is hard for them to have communication with other people and society. Moreover, teenagers without protection from adult are easily enticed doing bad activities like using crigarettes, racing motorbikes and the worst situation is stealing or robbing money . My neighborhood is an example,there is a family with three members- the father and two sons, their life is very difficult. The sons from 10 years old couldn’t feel the mother love and their father had to work from morning until night to pay for the family fees. Living without control from parent, they usually invited friends to house to drink beer and play game, sometime they used crigarettes and cocain which their dad didn’t know anything. Until they was catched by the police when trying to stealing money, the father cried a lot. My neiborhood situation shows how important of looking after the children. Many people believed that “money can buy anything”, but it can’t buy love and caring so parents should balance time to work and look after their children. As well as, asking children about friends and problem in class eveyday is a good way showing love to them.
In conclusion, the number of bad behaviors from teenagers would be decreased if they received love from parent and other people so I wish every children would be cared carefully and lived in high-quality habitants.
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- In some place group of teenagers ocasionally cause problems by behaving badly The reason Solution 56
- In some place group of teenagers ocasionally cause problems by behaving badly The reason Solution 56
- In some place group of teenagers ocasionally cause problems by behaving badly The reason Solution 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of problems'.
Suggestion: lots of problems
...are showing awful behaviors and causing lots of problem. Althought that is more and more popula...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Is
...l solutions to deal with this problem. Is is generally accepted that our parents hav...
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Line 2, column 614, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t situation is stealing or robbing money . My neighborhood is an example,there is ...
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Line 2, column 646, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...ng money . My neighborhood is an example,there is a family with three members- the fat...
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Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly and lived in high-quality habitants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99390243902 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47683253789 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59756097561 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5925918997 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.2 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105147413996 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383188403258 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047965894594 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100949399011 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674645526639 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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