Throughout the history male leaders always lead us to violence and conflict If society is governed by female leaders it will be more peaceful.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In the past, the chief of the wariors in a conflict ussually was a man who tends to end the arguement with vilolence and war. Some people point out that what if women are the leaders, because women seem to be more soft, they would choose compromising rather than fighting. This essay sets out to prove that leaders should be choosen based on ability, not on gender.
It is true that male are often show their emotion, especially with aggresive anger. On the other hand, nice and generous personality commonly belongs to female. In the old days, education was deeply affected by prejudice, boys had been expected to be strong, naughty and harsh while girls had been taught to be sweet and feminine since they were young. Moreover, this fact also is shown by science, for example, studies states that the number of men unable to hide their anger is higher than women'rate by 64%.
Nevertheless, gender couldn't give any conclusion about the person ability to be a chief. Whether choosing war or peace, it not depends on sexual elements, instead it is more about the situation. A good head must have intellegence, flexibility and generousity, with on those gifts, he or she would be able to choose the best way based on each specific circumstance, choosing to compromise, in some case, not appropriate. Moreover, females could also advocate and males might support peace, therefore, gender sometimes can't show anything about the personality
Overall, this essay illustrated the major characteristic of a leader is not about gender but ability, moreover, from where I stand, we can't assume about people based on sexuality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 239, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to compromise'.
Suggestion: to compromise
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Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...enrate by 64%. Nevertheless, gender couldnt give any conclusion about the person ab...
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Line 5, column 458, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e. Moreover, females could also advocate and males might support peace, therefore...
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Line 5, column 519, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...port peace, therefore, gender sometimes cant show anything about the personality ...
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Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ility, moreover, from where I stand, we cant assume about people based on sexuality....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for example, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97794117647 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65325051998 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643382352941 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.417408809 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.090909091 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139868870615 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486718174721 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317958964553 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818464823497 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327114139067 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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