The graph below show how much money in a city council gave to book clubs over a four - year period
The line graph demonstrates the expenditure on books donated to the book club by a city council over the given time period.
Overall, the line graph referring to the amount of money spent on books had an upward trend from year 1 to the end of year 3, while in the period from year 3 to year 4 witnessed a downward trend. In addition, the number of books funded to the club registered a fluctuation quantity.
It is clear that money poured to the book's donation recorded a steady upturn in the time between year 1 and year 2, at 20.000 and 21.000 pounds, respectively. However, the amount of money given to books skyrocketed, from 21.000 pounds by year 2 to 40.000 pounds by year 3. In contrast, the city council was paying less expenditure on books for the clubs. Between year 3 and 4, money spent on books was seen a plummet from 40.000 pounds in year 3 to around 35.000 pounds in year 4.
On the other hand, the city council donated a large number of books throughout the period. There was a gradual alleviate in the number of books from year 1 to year 2, at 6000 books and 5000 books, respectively. However, year 3 was registered a surge of the number of books funded, from 5000 books at the end of year 2 to 10000 books in year 3. Furthermore, the number of books given for the book clubs witnessed a considerable increase between year 3 and 4. Additionally, 13000 books are donated to the book clubs by the city council, by year 4.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'books'' or 'book's'?
Suggestion: books'; book's
... It is clear that money poured to the books donation recorded a steady upturn in th...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 436, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ks was seen a plummet from 40.000 pounds in year 3 to around 35.000 pounds in yea...
^^
Line 7, column 45, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...he other hand, the city council donated a large number of books throughout the period. There was ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, while, in addition, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 268.0 196.424390244 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40298507463 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55464885774 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.388059701493 0.547539520022 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.0 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6213491525 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356244926024 0.215688989381 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18503142088 0.103423049105 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759256509837 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271087155592 0.15604864568 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612633231869 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'books'' or 'book's'?
Suggestion: books'; book's
... It is clear that money poured to the books donation recorded a steady upturn in th...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 436, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ks was seen a plummet from 40.000 pounds in year 3 to around 35.000 pounds in yea...
^^
Line 7, column 45, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...he other hand, the city council donated a large number of books throughout the period. There was ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, while, in addition, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 268.0 196.424390244 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40298507463 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55464885774 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.388059701493 0.547539520022 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.0 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6213491525 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356244926024 0.215688989381 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18503142088 0.103423049105 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759256509837 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271087155592 0.15604864568 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612633231869 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.