Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the globalization process, we have witnessed the development in industrialisation from many countries in the world. This would cause a dispute about whether money from the government or private company's budget should be spent on ( building or upgrading schools and hospitals. There are scores of people who assert that the development of a country depends on the number of lavish and massive building constructions. However, money is supremely believed to be invested in hospital and school infrastructures by other people. From my perspective, money is vital to be invested in both ideas of the statement.
On the one hand, there are several rationales to acknowledge that construction projects of extravaganza buildings are worthy to be poured into. One of the most compelling reasons is that a country with a large number of modern buildings is consistently considered a standard of a developed country. This point is clearly manifested in the fact that industrial countries such as The United States of America, England, France have a variety of towers with splendid architecture and modern techniques. Subsequently, those construction projects are main elements to accelerate the development of a country. Another substantial reason demonstrates that approving government's budget with an aim to launch a plenty of buildings is a method for unemployment. Due to the fact that the rate of citizens who have not had a stable job is a constant concern for the national authority. Therefore, the increasing number of towers constructions are the opportunity for workers to take advantage and create their own paths.
On the other hand, there is a justifiable reason to believe that money should be spent on school and hospital facilities. In particular, education and medicine are both indispensable fields to be concerned by the government and residents in every country. According to the majority of people’s assessments, investing money in education and medicine stands for a radical thought, and represents a country's civilization. Indeed, recent research depicts that a country with money allocated to schools and hospitals is likely to have a surge percentage of the economy, higher than the average proportion of the world's .
In conclusion, I assess that pouring money into the development of buildings and enhancing the infrastructure’s quality of schools as well as hospitals are equally essential. As a result, I suggest that the government ought to take action to manage the expenditure from the government’s budget and other private enterprise investments, in terms of meeting the requirement of constructing buildings, along with schools and hospitals.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ivate companys budget should be spent on building or upgrading schools and hospit...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...mpelling reasons is that a country with a large number of modern buildings is consistently consid...
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Message: The proper name in singular (France) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ited States of America, England, France have a variety of towers with splendid archi...
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...erefore, the increasing number of towers constructions are the opportunity for wo...
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Suggestion: .
...han the average proportion of the worlds . In conclusion, I assess that pourin...
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Line 7, column 356, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erprise investments, in terms of meeting the requirement of constructing building...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2268.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45192307692 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31933814778 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507211538462 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 705.6 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5123057056 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25095241167 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834542515847 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078287822272 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159919487796 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682241819418 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ivate companys budget should be spent on building or upgrading schools and hospit...
^^
Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...mpelling reasons is that a country with a large number of modern buildings is consistently consid...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (France) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ited States of America, England, France have a variety of towers with splendid archi...
^^^^
Line 3, column 916, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erefore, the increasing number of towers constructions are the opportunity for wo...
^^
Line 5, column 614, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...han the average proportion of the worlds . In conclusion, I assess that pourin...
^^
Line 7, column 356, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erprise investments, in terms of meeting the requirement of constructing building...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2268.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45192307692 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31933814778 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507211538462 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 705.6 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5123057056 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25095241167 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834542515847 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078287822272 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159919487796 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682241819418 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.