Undoubtedly, ever upsurging private vehicles on the road ultimately cause traffic congestion. Similarly, the more carbon-consumption by traffic, the more pollution index would be. This essay intends to analyse both reasons and solution of this phenomenon .
There are manifold points why the utilization of private transportation is on the elevation among people. First and foremost, presently, majority of individual give more preference to comfort and convenient lifestyle. So, the car ownership is increasing rapidly. To elaborate it, while personal vehicle, it is easy for commuters to go one place to another place with ease. Although pollution is inclining at an alarming rate , individual can move in any weather conditions. To cite an example, cars bring an opportunity for travellers to save their precious time which makes more opportune especially those who go outside either for work or study . Nowadays, car keepers are increasing by 52%. Hence, it shows worthwhile approach for people.
On the other hand, government make public transportation more advanced because people will not face any type of transportation implication. For example, after the lanuched of Delhi metro , it become easy for visitors to go other places with heavy levy . Thus, it is lucrative for both environment and people . All of above, government should aware individual towards electronic vehicles. Moreover, government should impose tax vehicles entering the City.
In conclusion, congestion in cities can pose a danger to people's health due to their carbon emissions. Government should mitigate this issue .
- The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agriculture land becomes less productive The table shows how these cause affected three regions of the world during the 1990 50
- Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam How true do you think this statement is What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars 56
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61983471074 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10356290544 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.681818181818 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9965165815 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5555555556 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4444444444 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145232074904 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503835591846 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601752810895 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892359456096 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355664072173 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.72 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... reasons and solution of this phenomenon . There are manifold points why the ut...
^^
Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...llution is inclining at an alarming rate , individual can move in any weather cond...
^^
Line 3, column 647, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... who go outside either for work or study . Nowadays, car keepers are increasing by...
^^
Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ample, after the lanuched of Delhi metro , it become easy for visitors to go other...
^^
Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
... after the lanuched of Delhi metro , it become easy for visitors to go other places wi...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...itors to go other places with heavy levy . Thus, it is lucrative for both environm...
^^
Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ucrative for both environment and people . All of above, government should aware i...
^^
Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s. Government should mitigate this issue .
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61983471074 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10356290544 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.681818181818 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9965165815 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5555555556 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4444444444 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145232074904 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503835591846 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601752810895 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892359456096 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355664072173 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.72 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.