https www testbig com ielts writing task ii ielts general training essays some shops are open 24 hours day and 7 days

Of late, shops which will remain open all day and all night for full week are cropping up. This was not the case, a few years back when the opening timings were around 10 AM to 9 PM for every store. Some individuals might find it silly as the sales during night and execution, while I believe that it can be proved advantageous for not only consumers but also for workers and the firm. This essay, in the forthcoming paragraphs, will elucidate the same.

At the outset, it is a boon for the individuals who are working late as they can get their groceries. Any time they need. Doctors, for instance, have their ships changing regularly as for a week they might work during the day, whereas the following days they have to serve at night; so, they will be able to get milk, bread, salt, to name but a few even at night. Does, for individuals on their night shifts, it is the best.

On the other hand, employees can work according to the schedule, as they can choose to work at any time and any day, if their workplace opens 24 seven. Students, for example, Who want to coin money can work on weekends full time and can do part-time job for 3 to 4 hours at night. That is why for the people working on such stores, it is convenient to choose their shift timings.

Apart from this, the company will kind of substantial amount of money by the remaining open 24 hours a day on every day of the week. This is because, besides the daily day sales. , They can sell items at night as well. To cite an example, a store named ‘24 Seven’ in Chandigarh is open recently and its sales sold by 21% from the day they declared to work 24 seven. The company well, does, benefit a lot from this.

To conclude, the individuals who are associated with such stores, be it an employer, employee or even a buyer, everyone will be benefited.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...want to coin money can work on weekends full time and can do part-time job for 3 to 4 hou...
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Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s because, besides the daily day sales. , They can sell items at night as well. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, well, whereas, while, apart from, as for, for example, for instance, kind of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3724340176 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32927177324 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527859237537 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3057643616 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7058823529 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0588235294 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127243960578 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467601210792 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573508001692 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732618029627 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591403028051 0.056905535591 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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