The rules of women in environmental conservation.
The role of women in sustainable development and preserving the environment is undeniable. women create life, so they have enough ability to protect it. Their crucial activities for environmental conservation are more permanent and pervasive due to, fostering the next generations. By considering my professional educational and personal experiences as a mother and a student, I will put all my efforts for the improve women's environmental consciousness. Giving awareness about the necessity of preserving the environment is the first step to achieving long-term success and women are the master key due to their bold roles in society's structure. the earth rescue is related to women's awareness. Especially women's awareness should improve about the ecosystems' functions, as a university student, I used and will use any opportunity to showcase the role of women in managing, and safeguarding the environment. I see this issue as my commitment and use the different situations to introduce women as an effective solution for solving environmental problems as before. For instance, during one of my master course presentations, I used of examples that introduce women as successful managers of marshlands or wetlands.
I encourage women to have more effective roles. I vividly remember almost ten years ago; I participated in the Election headquarters of one of the presidential candidates and have spoken about women's crucial role in politics. In my country, environmental problems are interwoven with politics, hence women with environmental concerns should have more effective political roles.
Education at a higher level will provide me with the privilege to improve my knowledge and social status and become a more confident person, moreover give me this chance to transfer it to various people, especially at higher levels of political power more easily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Women
...eserving the environment is undeniable. women create life, so they have enough abilit...
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Line 1, column 408, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... student, I will put all my efforts for the improve womens environmental consciousness. Giv...
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Line 1, column 649, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...heir bold roles in societys structure. the earth rescue is related to womens aware...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, moreover, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 286.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51048951049 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26000155707 2.67179642975 122% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552447552448 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0719510236 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.230769231 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283312132708 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11128672082 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532637353949 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160269120706 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121318565691 0.0645574589148 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 58.1214874552 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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