What are the causes and solutions to obesity?
These days, there are more and more newspapers writing about people who have a growing problem with obesity in every age, specially in children and adults. This essay will talk about the causes that increase obesity and the solutions for each cause.
Most of the parents will say to their children that they need to eat a lot to grow but this has become a big problem that causes obesity. When anybody eats too much and they start to increase the weight out of control, it will create a hard time on balancing the diet to get fit. But how can they come like that if they just eat normal food? It is because of the way they eat each meal too, such as eating too much food that contains high calories and they do not eat any vegetables or practice to balance the body so it stored too much fat inside the body for a long time. To solve this problem, parents need to learn the best way for their children to eat which helps them stay fit and they can avoid obesity. This also fixes the old mind thinking about eating habits.
Secondly, for many adults who need to work most of the day or are very busy but do not have time or less money for meals will choose the type of food that is fast and cheap. The first thing that appears on their mind is junk food, the common and famous type of food around the world like KFC, Jolly Bee, Pizza Hut, etc. Healthy food is usually very expensive and needs to be processed before eating. A way to decrease this is that the government can give it a higher tax or higher price to make people buy it less. When the price increases people need to consider whether to buy it or not.
In conclusion, the two common reasons are the way people eat uncontrollably and abuse of fast food too much to limit the time spent on preparing the meal. To stop this, parents have to understand the way to have a healthy and balanced meal. The government also have to make the taxes and prices higher for fast food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27717391304 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00472032755 2.80592935109 71% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502717391304 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2925479964 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.375 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0588472784287 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0263316590612 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724390304981 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0588628330664 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925354937074 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.84 12.4159519038 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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