Advantages and disadvantages of living in the city.
Currently, people are flocking to the city to live and set up more and more, along with that, there are many rural areas applying the policy of urbanization because of the great advantages it has. Besides those advantages, the arising of disadvantages is inevitable.
One of the advantages of living in the city is more job opportunities, you can easily find any job in the big cities. It is more convenient to find a higher paying job if you have an academic degree. Secondly, the city has a lot of services such as shops, restaurants, banks, .... It is available in every corner of the city, as long as you want to buy anything, you can have it.
Traffic can be one of the big problems when we live in cities. There are too many people using transport in big cities, especially during rush hours or on major holidays of the year, which leads to serious traffic jams. At the same time, dust from motorbikes, cars,... also greatly affects human health. In addition, using public transport can also cause traffic accidents.
In brief, living in a city has a lot of great advantages, on the contrary, it also brings many disadvantages. However, I personally think that if you adapt and have the experience of living in the city, you will find many ways to improve the negatives here.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...he same time, dust from motorbikes, cars,... also greatly affects human health. In...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, second, secondly, so, in addition, in brief, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66519823789 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68545364518 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57268722467 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7497975269 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4615384615 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249704441242 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764124911748 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843111648305 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151967666138 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834331666056 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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