People are too quick to take action; instead they should stop to think of the possible consequences of what they might do.
The world currently makes us to act by leaps and bounds. It happens due to the numbers of challenges we face daily. However, we have to think carefully in order not to be damaged by them.
Nowadays people are acting very fast. This is because the life makes them to demeanor in such way. If you behavior slowly, you lose the chance to get a good job. If you do not take advantage that the fees of your country is low, the opportunity of traveling abroad just disappear. Furthermore, you may lose the chance to replace your car when the taxes are low. People not just don’t care but they also do not mind what it is going on around them. Whether they make their lives happen or they lose them.
On the other hand, people may lose much more of what they are already losing. Sometimes it is a great deal to stop, think, and then take action politically. We need to research before buying a house. We ought to look at the location because we need security for our families. We should look forward to seeing our career so that we make a lot of money and we have a comfortable life. A couple needs to pay attention in the income and then decide to have children. Therefore, it is much more important to watch out our actions before beginning working.
When we plan our lives, we somewhat feel confident that they will succeed. And, we should make plans, otherwise there is no sense to live. Planning can be done from a little task to a big one. We need to plan how we are going to cross the street. Likewise, we are supposed to research what subject to study in the college.
Finally, acting quickly sometimes is necessary. But, the more you wait to accomplish your goals, the better are the results.
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the life makes them to demeanor in such way.
Description: 'demeanor' is not a verb
People not just don’t care but they also do not mind what it is going on around them.
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More sentences varieties wanted. Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
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