Q3: Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished. Others think their parents should be punished instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
While one school of thought holds that it is advisable to inflict appropriate punishment on young offenders, others are adamant that imposing penalties should be implemented on their parents. This essay will first closely scrutinize/elaborate on both views before concluding that I agree with the latter.
On the one hand, it is understandable why some people propose that giving punishment to children who are engaged in violent crimes is crucial, as it will refrain them from re-offending the crime. Perhaps the foremost reason would be that caregivers cannot determine their children's character and are not always blameworthy in every circumstance. This is commonly seen in children with mental health issues, such as neurological disorders. In addition, children also tend to be susceptible to criminal behavior when they are overexposed to bad social backgrounds. Therefore, proper punishment will prevent them from repeating their bad behavior in the future.
On the other hand, I side with those who say that penalizing harsh penalties on parents for the destructive behaviors of their offspring. The critical rationale in favor of this notion is that children are malleable at their ages, and parents always play a crucial role in molding young children's mindsets. Therefore, caregivers should take responsibility for their children's law-breaking actions. This can be seen in young children living in abused households, who can effortlessly imitate their upbringers' acts and will consider extreme activities a regular habit. Furthermore, parents' indifference toward their children is a significant factor that leads to unexpected actions by children. In fact, it seems that most modern parents do not tend to spend quality time with their kids to focus on their manners or social life to detect their offspring's problems. Given these, parents should bear responsibility for their children's crimes.
In conclusion, while there are justifications for the introduction of punishments for child offenders, I am convinced that parents should be punished and responsible for their offspring's behavior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.596875 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12581083231 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.71476076 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.4 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330815679054 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110548382065 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526533417599 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204663641622 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00822614009206 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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