Modes of communication are constantly changing. What are some of these changes? Say which one change you like best and why?
'Man is by nature a social animal', said the Greek philosopher Aristotle. This attribute made him constantly explore different and more effective ways to communicate with fellow humans. Thus, what may have started as a sign-language, gradually transformed into words and sentences, by which one could communicate one's ideas and thoughts. His endeavor to reach out to a vast multitude of the person across the globe, lead him to make inventions like the telephone and the telegraph. These till the twentieth century were powerful and effective means of communication by which he could reach out to people all over the world. They were however too slow and cumbersome to meet his insatiable desire.
However, with the advent of the twenty-first century, there came a dramatic and revolutionary change in our mode of communication. The vast multitude of communication satellites and the arrival of computers paved the way for the internet. This provided easy and instant connectivity to communicate with anyone across the globe. the world wide web through networking sites like Facebook, Twitter, and Google, reduced the world to a global village, where anyone can communicate his views or seek information by pressing a key on a computer. Besides communicating one can also visually interact with others, using webcams and microphones. Thus, what took hours or even weeks has now become possible instantly.
Telephones that used cables have now made way for mobiles. This small gadget using a wireless medium has revolutionized communication. Being extremely light and portable, and coming loaded with value-added features like a camera, audio and video recording, music, and many others, are now indispensable for youth like me. They are undoubtedly the easiest and most effective way to stay connected with your near and dear ones.
The integration of the Internet in mobile is undoubtedly the best change ever to have taken place in the field of telecommunication. This feature in my mobile now enables me to use my dead time to the best use. I can now access any information on the net for my project work at any time, find my way about the city, or interact with my friends and relatives without using a computer or the hassle of visiting a cyber cafe.
Our insatiable need to communicate has led to the constant change in our mode of communication, ever since the dawn of civilization. Out of all the changes, the best change ever to happen was the advent of the mobile phone. This has become my most valuable and trusted companion, without which life is unimaginable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 312, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ntences, by which one could communicate ones ideas and thoughts. His endeavor to rea...
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Line 2, column 328, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...mmunicate with anyone across the globe. the world wide web through networking sites...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2151.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07311320755 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98808654876 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561320754717 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 703.8 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4054734333 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7727272727 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.40909090909 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220902680132 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579117391021 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589449151378 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120944945938 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071389324127 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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